I love movies so much that i spend the most of my spare time on watching them.Particularly,it's useful to improve my English learning with the aid of foreign movies.Among so many films which i had ever seen,the one i like the best is Transformer.This film was made in America.It used a lot of high-techs and digital special effects.I like it very much.This film has huge scenes and famous movie stars.Besides,this film had a good story,and told me to respect anybody protects us.This film asked us to be brave to fight the enemies and had the courage to live in the danger.It also had a lot of robot troys i like.This is my favorite movie.

I hope you can become a second Edison。come on baby.
ReplyDeletehhhhhhh i hope so
DeleteYour blog is very interesting :)
ReplyDeletethank you
DeleteI like Transformer too!
ReplyDeleteyes its so cool
DeleteI like Transformer too!
ReplyDeleteit's a very good film
DeleteHey, Chen.
ReplyDeleteI like transformer as well. I really enjoyed watching it. Nice to know how interested you are in robot and glad that you can learn the moral values from the movie itself. Btw, I just want to remind you that you haven't had any underlined topic sentence. Thank you. :)
wow thank you remind me the thing, and thank you for read it .mua i will change it later
DeleteYour story so interesting, watching movies have many benefits so we can learn something from the movie that we watch.
ReplyDeleteYour paragraph is good enough, but you need to pay attention about grammar on writing so your paragraph will be perfect.(^_^)
really i check it many times ok i will check it again
Deletehello chen
ReplyDeletei do also like transformer, especially Dark of the Moon :D
it is a very cool paragraph :D
btw you may recheck some of your words , like "Besides,it had a good story,and it told me to respect anybody protects us" will be better if you change it to be "Beside that ,this film also had a good story and taught me to respect anybody who protects us"
after all perfect ;) Jia yo
keep writing ;)
Hi chen
ReplyDeletealthough im not a robotic lover , but i like to read your article most! Keep writing :)
Hi chen, I also like to watch movies, what ever the genre. I agree with you that we can improves our english with watch the movie. I hope your skill will be better more and more
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