My new 'girlfriend'

1.Plan your composition about an appropriate career for your partner.
        a    Finish the sentence about your partner.
               I think Neng would make a good teacher.
        b    In the chart below,write three reasons why you thing so and some supporting         points for each.

	Paragraph 2	Paragraph 3	Paragraph 4
Main idea	introduce her	make a job for her	she is my best friend
Supporting points	confident,hard-working,passionate	Be friendly to children	summary

     c    Now write a short introductory paragraph,like the first paragraph in part 6.
              Neng,it's her nickname.She is confident, hard-working and always passionate on study. She likes helping other people.She often teaches me to solve some difficult questions. She is also a very kind person and so selfless that she would notice every detail. Moreover, she is a laughing girl and I'm lucky to have her as my friend.

2.Write a topic sentence for each of your main ideas.
    a  write about my current situation.
    b  introduce her
    c  the reason why she suitable as a teacher

3.Finally,on a separate piece of paper,put the parts together and write a composition.Underline the topic sentence in each paragraph.

4.Think of a title and write it at the top of your paper.

5.When you finish,complete this checklist.
   Writing checklist.
    ·Are your reasons supported with details?
    ·Do you have clear topic sentences for each paragraph?
        Do you have transition words to start paragraphs2,3and4?
        Does your title fit your composition?


   Until now,i have been here for about two months. It's a new living environment for me.But i learn a lot of things here and make a lot of friends here.Let me introduce you a friend who help me a lot and care me a lot.
  
   Neng,it's her nickname.She is confident, hard-working and always passionate on study. She likes helping other people.She often teaches me to solve some difficult questions. She is also a very kind person and so selfless that she would notice every detail. Moreover, she is a laughing girl and I'm lucky to have her as my friend.
    
    If i make a job for her.I think that Neng would make a 
good teacher.Because she is very friendly to everyone and doing things very responsible.Also she likes working with children,doing activities with them, especially enjoys spending time with them.

    Neng,a future teacher.You are the best person for god.By the way ,don't forget that if it's possible i will take you to the snow.